Unedited, perhaps a little "ideologically sensitive", and I have drastically improved in my writing since I took advanced journalism/writing collegiate courses. My instructor wanted a firestarter, and perhaps I succeeded; perhaps not, but it's up to you to decide. Please leave a comment and critique this writing. I won't rewrite or edit this---it's old homework and I have more pressing demands, but I still would like to hear your input. Fun, fun...thank you!


Oh, and, yes; there are Wikipedia cited sources. Word for the academic people here: DO NOT CITE FROM THAT BLOODY WIKIPEDIA IT IS NOT DEPENDABLE AND IS CONSTANTLY EDITED!!! PLEASE!!! YOUR TEACHER WILL HAVE YOU PUBLICLY FLAYED FOR THIS!!!